First Attempts
These pictures seem forced - unnatural and badly thought through. The bold, colourful text doesn't suit them and the story (on the left) is difficult to understand - they make friends (taking under the moon/sun) they get engaged, they get married. Also, the groom is upside down in the wedding.
Second Attempts - much better, final pieces?
I prefer these ones - they look more sophisticated and give the clips context with the keyboard and mouse in the background. However, I don't like the 'Bored' one on the bottom left - the angle and lighting combined to make the picture look dull and rather lifeless. I like the contrast in the portrait picture (poster), I got this effect from 'Colour Lookup', a layer add-on in Photoshop CS6.
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